Your analysis of question 5, demonstrates a basic understanding of how you addressed your target audience. You have started to consider the primary and secondary research that you carried out and you have started to consider some of the results that you received. However, these points need to be elaborated on further, by focusing on how the results assisted you in creating your sequence.You have started to do this, by focusing on the role of having a hidden identify and including a knife, but further ideas and planning needs to be referenced.
Your analysis of question 5, demonstrates a basic understanding of how you addressed your target audience. You have started to consider the primary and secondary research that you carried out and you have started to consider some of the results that you received. However, these points need to be elaborated on further, by focusing on how the results assisted you in creating your sequence.You have started to do this, by focusing on the role of having a hidden identify and including a knife, but further ideas and planning needs to be referenced.
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